|Super busy poet and poetry advocate, Scott Owens.|
So, Robert wrote to me with a simple request: write a 500-1,000 word personal story about a moment that helped guide my life or shape my worldview. Easy, right? No need to complicate things, just tell about the time I learned the meaning of love while holding my sick 4-month old daughter at 2:00 A.M.; or the moment my stepson burned himself and in caring for him I realized that I had overcome my own childhood abuse and was ready to fully embrace fatherhood; or the night I listened to my grandfather string stars together into his own constellations and recognized the power of creativity and self-determination; or the time when I was 8 and had to reach up inside a birthing cow and turn the calf so it could come out and realized none of us can do it alone. Easy, right?
The problem is, all of the moments I could think of I have already written about in the form of poems, and telling those stories now as prose would seem somehow sacrosanct, a reductionist undoing. The poems, I hope, embody the tensions of those moments, recreate the epiphanies as if they were the readers as well as mine, retain the life of the moment in a combination of language, imagery, and association that might well be lost in the single-minded clarity of prose. At least that's how the poetry-lover in me thinks. As a teacher of poetry, I would never ask a student to retell the story of Galway Kinnell's "Little Sleep's Head Sprouting Hair in the Moonlight" in prose. I would, of course, invite them to write about the poem in prose, but not to try to prosaically recreate the moment of the poem by undoing, even negating the energy contained and conveyed through the poetic compression of the moment's perceptual, physical, cognitive, emotional, and spiritual experience.
Nevertheless, I greatly appreciate the impetus behind Robert's request. In fact, I've been teaching workshops around the South for a couple of years now on techniques to access and organize such moments in our experience as potential subject matter for both poetry and prose. So, the last thing I would want to say to Robert on this request is "never mind." Instead, I'll do as poets tend to do anyway and complicate his request by giving him a couple of moments that match his criteria except that they're written not as prose but poetry. I hope they'll still work for his purposes and that they'll prove enjoyable and fruitful for his readers.
Promises at 2 A.M.
After four months of holding you,
my body sways constantly,
rocks a little when I walk.
My left arm keeps the shape
of a cradle. My mouth hums
lullabies night and day.
Little Sawyer, still more hope
than substance, I will be everything
a father ought to be. I will teach you
all that I know, all I can learn.
I will give you every chance
I can afford and more.
I will hold you when you hurt,
sing to you when the noise of the world
and your body's frailty leave you unsure.
And I will never let them take you, ever.
I would flame at the stake for you,
bare my neck beneath the blade,
suck the strongest poisons straight
from your body’s wounds, wander the wilderness
in quest for all you need, bend
my knee to any heaven's oppression.
I will give all and more
to save my life by saving yours.
The first time my stepson cried
without his mother’s hands
to brush the pain away
I came to him quickly
without thinking. I touched him
with almost a space between
my flesh and his, the way
a woman, aging and overweight,
steps off a curb as if the path
beneath her might not be real.
And then, he leaned into me,
and my whole body changed
into something I had not known
existed, and what was once
no part of me began
to keep the ticking
of our two wrists as one.
Looking for Faces in the Night Sky
These are things anyone could have made
up. The stars are nothing but stars,
and playing dot-to-dot in the night
sky makes anything possible.
Years ago from the stone porch
my grandfather pointed them out:
the lion, the great bear, the hunter's sword.
This one he called Mary and showed me
how the stars made a woman’s face.
Looking for faces in the night sky
we string stars into shapes of things
we fear or long to remember.
I see spider, sparrowhawk, bobwhite.
This one I'll call woman becoming
an angel, the grotesque buds of wings
sprouting in her back.
Acts of Defiance
Just a boy,
not yet eight,
and knowing nothing
of the world,
I simply did as I was told
and reached my hands,
my forearms, long and thin,
even up to the elbows,
into the bloody back end
of a moaning cow
to grasp what I felt there
and pull harder
when it wouldn't come
until something appeared,
and pull harder still
until something became
a wet mess of calf
spilling into my lap
and my uncles laughing
and my grandfather,
his hand on my shoulder,
looking at me hard,
eyes full of seriousness
saying, Good job.
A lifetime later,
I finally understand
the weight of it all.
I look at your mother
spent in bed
and say, Good job,
and then into your own
and say again,
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Enjoyed this very much Scott and Robert.
Thanks, Nancy! Scott rocks!
Awesome poetry. Glad to find a new poet, and sent him a "friend request" on Facebook. His poetry is lovely.
Glad to see you feature Scott. I love his poetry and collaborating with him was a time in my poetry life I'll never forget!
An enjoyable read, Scott and Robert. Thanks.
snScott, Thanks for staying faithful to the impulse of the lyric moment, "a moment in time drenched in emotion." This is the kind of poem humans can understand and can most easily relate to. Thanks for sharing.
As a Scott Owens fan, I'm always glad to see more fans added!
Maren O. Mitchell
Beautiful moments captured, Scott. Just breathtaking, especially for those of us who are parents. I enjoyed meeting both of you, Scott and Robert, at the Blue Ridge Conference in Georgia in April 2011. I went to my motel room the first night, after the event where the three of us read, on a phenomenal high. Scott Owens had praised my prose. I even tried to dodge the praise, saying I was accustomed to nonfiction, but Scott wouldn't let me loose. It was my first time reading to an open group like that, and I told my husband, almost crying, that someone had really liked my fiction. Never got to really thank you.
Fruitful indeed, Scott! Your poetry featured here evoked emotion from me. Really stunning work. Thank you, Robert, for this series and your work!
Robert, this series is inspiring on so many levels. Today's post (Scott Owens, you are fabulous at what you do) nudged me right into my own notebook to work on new ideas.
I'll come back to this page--more than once, I'm sure. Of curse, we know poetry and prose aren't interchangeable, but I'm so happy to see advocates for the notion that one needs to be deliberately encoded for an ordinary reader, while the other is meant to be clear. Thank you for the arrow of comprehension that pierces to directly from a poem to the heart of the reader.
Last try! Three times my comment has disappeared :( I should start an author photo business since Scott is still using that one lol! Poetry hickory is an amazing event and scott is well -awesome :)
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